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How we treat animals in our lives

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It is important that we take care of the animals it is morally wrong for human beings to be cruel to animals, and morally good for human beings to be kind to animals. Human beings and animals always had an important relationship animals can be some of our best friends they can be loyal to us, love is. And serve us moreover they can also defend and die for us Given that animals are creatures that have a soul, body and senses And just like humans, God created them, we must respect them and take good care of them Animals should be treated in the way that is best for the animals concerned - which may not be the way that suits human beings And we must never forget that animals also have the right to live In case of bad weather, think about them and provide them with food and shelter.
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IELTS essay How we treat animals in our lives

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
152 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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