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Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. DVaD6
The topic of small business being replaced by big malls, was always debatable, has now become more controversial. It can been strongly agreed upon fact that enormous malls has some favourable arguments in favour of it, however, there has always been some contention about it. At the outset, there are numerous reasons why little shops are getting destroyed by huge malls, but the most alarming one lies in that fact that giant malls has more shops like grocery, clothing, meat, coffee, and many other shops, for this reason an individual can get what they want in at one particular building. Indeed, there have been some recorded instance that majority of people in Australia visit mall to do their grocery shopping along with snapping attire and enjoy beautiful breakfast in morning. For this reason, possessive nature of big shopping center are killing tiny shops, which cannot be denied. Nevertheless, some people are of opposing view and tend to believe that small shops are irreplaceable, which can be addressed with some positive facets as well, as there are innumerable facts in favour of that, but the most pre-dominant one stems from the fact that portable shops can be found near our houses, which is not only can be easily accessed but also saves our time paying visit at mall, which are generally far away from us and stop us to spend an extra money on foods and clothings. As an illustration, findings of some studies reveals that in-order to save time and money some people like to visit nearby shops. Therefore, importance of compact shops is undeniable. From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded the impact of big shopping malls over little shops is prominent, although, we can still see some people will not outrightly give up upon small shops.
The topic of
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small
business
being replaced
by
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big
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malls
, was always debatable, has
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now
become more controversial. It
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can been
strongly
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agreed
upon
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fact
that enormous
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malls
has
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some
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favourable
arguments in
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favour
of it,
however
, there has always been
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some
contention about it.

At the outset, there are numerous reasons why
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little
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shops
are getting
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destroyed
by huge
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malls
,
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but
the most alarming one lies in that
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fact
that giant
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malls
has more
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shops
like grocery, clothing, meat, coffee, and
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many
other
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shops
,
for this reason
an individual can
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get
what they want in at one particular building.
Indeed
, there have been
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some
recorded instance that majority of
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people
in Australia visit
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mall
to do their grocery shopping along with snapping attire and enjoy
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beautiful
breakfast in morning.
For this reason
, possessive nature of
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big
shopping center are killing tiny
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shops
, which cannot
be denied
.

Nevertheless
,
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some
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people
are of opposing view and tend to believe that
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small
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shops
are irreplaceable, which can
be addressed
with
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some
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positive
facets
as well
, as there are innumerable facts in
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favour
of that,
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but
the most
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pre-dominant
one stems from the
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fact
that portable
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shops
can
be found
near our
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houses
, which is not
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only
can be
easily
accessed
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but
also
saves our time paying visit at
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mall
, which are
generally
far away from us and
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stop
us to spend
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an extra money
on foods and
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clothings
. As an illustration, findings of
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studies reveals that in-order to save time and money
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some
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people
like to visit nearby
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shops
.
Therefore
, importance of compact
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shops
is undeniable.

From what has
been discussed
above, it can
be concluded
the impact of
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big
shopping
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malls
over
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little
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shops
is prominent, although, we can
still
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see
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some
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people
will not
outrightly
give up upon
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small
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shops
.
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IELTS essay Large shopping malls are replacing small shops.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
301 words
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