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How was your first impression

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My first impression to be honest probably good. First, before the interview, I did some research about "how can I prepare for an interview? ". I found a lot of advice some of them how important is body language, also did not use slang language ever. When I was in the interview, I was extremely nervous because it was the first interview in my life. He asked me general questions. I did well but I had one issue stutter because I was nervous as I said before. Eventually, I would like to everyone have an interview take it easy and these advice.
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IELTS essay How was your first impression

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
102 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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