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How to teach children to be polite.

How to teach children to be polite. 0EOG3
Nowadays, every parent is more likely to learn how to teach their children to be polite because they think that people today are rude. There are some ways to help them solve this problem. First and foremost, the parents must set a good example for their children. In fact, most of children learn how to behave through their parents, so we can say that the more polite parents are, the more good behaviour their children are. Another tip is that the parents can let them attend several skill classes because it is the best and most practical way to learn to be polite. When children interact with thier friends, they can learn how to be kind quickly. At last but not least, children must be taught how to be polite through daily activities. For example, before the meal, parent should request thier children that they invite the elderly and the parents fist. By doing this, children can know how to respect each other.
Nowadays, every
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is more likely to
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how to teach their
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children
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polite
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think
that
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people
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today
are rude. There are
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some
ways to
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help
them solve this problem.
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and foremost, the
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parents
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must
set a
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good
example for their
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children
. In fact, most of
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children
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learn
how to behave through their
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parents
,
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so
we can say that the more
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polite
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parents
are, the more
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good
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behaviour
their
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children
are. Another tip is that the
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parents
can
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let
them attend several
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skill
classes
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because
it is the best and most practical way to
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learn
to be
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polite
. When
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children
interact with
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thier
friends, they can
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learn
how to be kind
quickly
. At last
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but
not least,
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children
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must
be taught
how to be
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polite
through daily activities.
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,
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before
the meal,
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parent
should request
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thier
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children
that they invite the elderly and the
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parents
fist. By doing this,
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children
can know how to respect each other.

IELTS essay How to teach children to be polite.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
163 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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