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How to stop bullying in the classroom

How to stop bullying in the classroom XDkKE
Nowadays there is one thing frequent and also very dangerous that takes place in the school environment: Bullying. Although this problem has been happening for many decades, people and the government are talking more about it; everyone is trying to find a solution or at least understand how to lessen the effects of bullying. In my opinion, this bad behaviour is a result of the way the kids and teenagers are being educated and maybe regular meetings between parents and teachers could minimize the danger. First, the way a kid is being raised by its parents is crucial and will determine how they will act at school among others. It is important that every boy and girl have an education based on good values, such as helping and making good for others. Children need to live in a healthy environment at home and shoud learn early in life the importance of treating every human being with love and respect, regardless of their social position, skin color, gender and appearence, for example. These values must be shared even before the minors go to school for the first time. Second, teachers and parents can work together and can do a lot to lessen the problem of bullying in the classrooms. The professional is doing his/her share of work when quickly spot who is the author and who is the victim of bullying. Asking for regular meeting with the parents of these kids would help to understand what is the source of the harassment and what can be done to stop it. In conclusion, bullying is something that occurs all over the world and is making our children grow up more stressed. The causes can be many, but there are some basic things the society can do the tackle this: an education based in good values and the proximity between the teachers and parents of the students.
Nowadays there is one thing frequent and
also
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very
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dangerous
that takes place in the school environment:
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Bullying
. Although this problem has been happening for
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many
decades,
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people
and the
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government
are talking more about it; everyone is trying to find a solution or at least understand how to lessen the effects of
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bullying
. In my opinion, this
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bad
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behaviour
is a result of the way the kids and
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teenagers
are
being educated
and maybe regular meetings between
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parents
and teachers could minimize the
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danger
.

First
, the way a kid is
being raised
by its
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parents
is crucial and will determine how they will act at school among others. It is
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important
that every boy and girl have an education based on
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good
values, such as helping and making
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good
for others. Children need to
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live
in a healthy environment at home and
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shoud
learn early in life the importance of treating every human being with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
and respect, regardless of their social position, skin color, gender and
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appearence
,
for example
. These values
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must
be shared
even
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before
the minors go to school for the
first
time.

Second, teachers and
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parents
can work together and can do a lot to lessen the problem of
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bullying
in the classrooms. The professional is doing his/her share of work when
quickly
spot who is the author and who is the victim of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bullying
. Asking for regular meeting with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parents
of these kids would
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help
to understand what is the source of the harassment and what can
be done
to
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stop
it.

In conclusion
,
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bullying
is something that occurs all over the world and is making our children grow up more
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stressed
. The causes can be
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many
,
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but
there are
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some
basic things the society can do the tackle this: an education based in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
values and the proximity between the teachers and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parents
of the students.
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IELTS essay How to stop bullying in the classroom

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
314 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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