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How to protect natural word?

How to protect natural word? 8Lgql
Though we think of cities as human habits the urban environment is home to lots of animals and plants. Furthermore, the various environment exposures notably toxic chemicals, air pollution and biological agents on the human body. Consequently, it has been argued that the only way to plunge usage the natural things is to further enhance the price of illegally. On the other hand, an animal is called endangered when there are so few of it’s kind left that is in danger of becoming extinct. Therefore, we must protect our plants and crops seriously. However, the best way to safeguard crop damage are by incorporating integrated pest and insect management. In brief, the central point is always keep safe our natural things and don’t irksome them.
Though we
think
of cities as human habits the urban environment is home to lots of animals and plants.
Furthermore
, the various environment exposures
notably
toxic chemicals, air pollution and biological agents on the human body.
Consequently
, it has
been argued
that the
only
way to plunge usage the natural things is to
further
enhance the price of
illegally
.
On the other hand
, an animal
is called
endangered when there are
so
few
of it’s kind
left
that is
in
danger
of becoming extinct.
Therefore
, we
must
protect our plants and crops
seriously
.
However
, the best way to safeguard crop damage are by incorporating integrated pest and insect management.
In brief
, the central point is always
keep
safe our natural things and don’t irksome them.
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IELTS essay How to protect natural word?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
125 words
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