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How to make Chung cake in Tet

How to make Chung cake in Tet Bwnb6
We soak glutinous rice overnight, then drain and shake with salt. We cook and mold green beans into small balls. Pork is cut into squares and seasoned with salt and pepper. Second, we wrap Chung's cake with dong leaves. The process is also very interesting and meticulous. We put dong leaves on a flat surface and put a small bowl of sticky rice on top. Then sprinkle green beanballs on top, place 2 pork balls in the middle and sprinkle another green beanball on top. Next, cover another small bowl of sticky rice on top. Then, fold the leaves, wrap the cake into a square, tie it with a bamboo string. The final step is to boil the cake. We put the cake into the pot, pour enough water to cover the cake, cook on high heat. When the water boils, we add just enough to cover the cake. We boil the cake continuously for 10-12 hours depending on the number of cakes. Then we take them out of the pot and press them under the weight for a few hours to remove excess water.
We soak glutinous rice overnight, then drain and shake with salt. We cook and mold green beans into
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small
balls. Pork is
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cut
into squares and seasoned with salt and pepper.

Second, we wrap Chung's
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cake
with dong
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leaves
. The process is
also
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very
interesting and meticulous. We put dong
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leaves
on a flat surface and put a
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small
bowl of sticky rice on
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top
. Then sprinkle green
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beanballs
on
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top
, place 2 pork balls in the middle and sprinkle another green
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beanball
on
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.
Next
, cover another
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bowl of sticky rice on
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top
. Then, fold the
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leaves
, wrap the
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cake
into a square, tie it with a bamboo string.

The final step is to boil the
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cake
. We put the
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cake
into the pot, pour
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enough
water to cover the
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cake
, cook on high heat. When the water boils, we
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add
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just
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enough
to cover the
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cake
. We boil the
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cake
continuously
for 10-12 hours depending on the number of
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cakes
. Then we take them out of the pot and press them under the weight for a few hours to remove excess water.
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IELTS essay How to make Chung cake in Tet

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