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How to make a good first impression on your crush

How to make a good first impression on your crush oxN6B
When you have a crush on someone, show elegance and respect at first meeting. First, Confidence is a necessary starting point. If you're shy and don't dare speak first, don't worry. Instead, if you're an extrovert, you can show confidence by smiling widely and looking crush in the eye to get their attention. Next, gather up the courage to talk to them and do not interrupt when the other person is talking, this makes the other person very uncomfortable and thinks that you do not respect and do not care about what they have to say. Second, Dress to impress. Looks are an integral part of getting your partner's attention, so research the different styles and outfits that appeal to you the most to express your own style in a trendy yet casual way.
When you have a crush on someone,
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show
elegance and respect at
first
meeting.
First
, Confidence is a necessary starting point. If you're shy and don't dare speak
first
, don't worry.
Instead
, if you're an extrovert, you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
confidence by smiling
widely
and looking crush in the eye to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
their attention.
Next
,
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gather up
the courage to talk to them and do not interrupt when the other person is talking, this
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makes
the other person
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very
uncomfortable and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thinks
that you do not respect and do not care about what they
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have to
say. Second, Dress to impress. Looks are an integral part of getting your partner's attention,
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so
research the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
styles and outfits that appeal to you the most to express your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
style in a trendy
yet
casual way.
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IELTS essay How to make a good first impression on your crush

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
134 words
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