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How to grow a frog life cycle

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The given picture shows the how many stages are required for the life cycle of frog in a lake. Overall, it can be seen that the life cycle of frog is needed eleven steps to complete it. In the beginning, adult frog gives the eggs that eggs grow into embryos. After that tadpoles are produced and they clinging to water plant. Then external gills are emerged for breathing. Next the tails of the frog keep on growing and also hinder legs started appearing which help them to move. In the next stage, whatever they eat which is stored in the tail. Over a seventh stage, front legs of the frog are appeared. Following this step, its tail becomes shorter. In the penultimate stage frog becomes younger and finally it grown up and becomes adult. Also this process is continuous. In summary, the life cycle of frog begins with laying eggs and ends with turning into mature frog.
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stages
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frog
in a lake.

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, it can be
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that the life cycle of
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frog
is needed
eleven steps to complete it.

In the beginning, adult
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frog
gives the eggs that eggs grow into embryos. After that tadpoles are
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produced and
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they clinging
to water plant. Then external gills
are emerged
for breathing.
Next
the tails of the
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frog
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keep
on growing and
also
hinder legs
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started
appearing which
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help
them to
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move
. In the
next
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stage
, whatever they eat which
is stored
in the tail. Over a seventh
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stage
, front legs of the
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frog
are appeared
. Following this step, its tail becomes shorter. In the penultimate
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stage
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frog
becomes younger and
finally
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grown
up and becomes adult.
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Also
this process is continuous.

In summary, the life cycle of
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frog
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begins
with laying eggs and ends with turning into mature
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frog
.

IELTS essay How to grow a frog life cycle

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
157 words
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