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How to get a proper job is necessary for you to bemy wife in the last list

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This is currently contentious argument over whether should be a sense of competition encouraged or children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adult. In my own perspective, co-operation between each other is extremely necessary. Firstly. A numerous people have a confidence to gear up a students for the competition. The reason is that they will try to beat one another and became more experiencful in the future. On the other hand, In these cases we are unable to create a unity between them. They only work for their own purpose. Furthermore, A number of people think that co-operation awareness is more suitable rather than competition. It is more useful because students will help to each other. For example, When a student need a help of their fellow. He will share the knowledge and solve their problem. In this way a good environment and brotherhood ralation will build between them. In conclusion, It is not appropriate idea that held a competition. A student must help to each other.
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currently
contentious argument over whether should be a sense of
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competition
encouraged or children who
are taught
to co-operate
rather
than compete become more useful adult. In my
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own
perspective, co-operation between each
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other
is
extremely
necessary.

Firstly
. A numerous
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people
have a confidence to gear up a
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students
for the
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competition
. The reason is that they will try to beat one another and became more
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experiencful
in the future. On the
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other
hand, In these cases we are unable to create a unity between them. They
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only
work for their
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own
purpose.

Furthermore
, A number of
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people
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think
that co-operation awareness is more suitable
rather
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. It is more useful
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students
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help
to each
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.
For example
, When a
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student
need a
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help
of their fellow. He will share the knowledge and solve their problem. In this way a
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good
environment and brotherhood
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ralation
will build between them.

In conclusion
, It is not appropriate
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idea
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. A
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student
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IELTS essay How to get a proper job is necessary for you to bemy wife in the last list

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
172 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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