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In town and cities large shopping malls are replacing small shops

In town and cities large shopping malls are replacing small shops Q2ny9
It has been observed that comes Sumice13 and shopping centers are being built instead of Small Food side shops in the water areas. I belive that such a kind of talend is nequctive to longe extant. The for their reasons for my opinion are discussed There are several benefits of loving Small Shape in the set to cress The fornemmest one is development of the local economy. As people will purchase from local shops, the shopkeepars will earn substantial arenact of This Toome will generate toixes that will be used by the Deverboent for the progress of the city on hand, if the the local businesses this will social face mamy and eumomic Probleme Further more, the Hexe available in small Shops afforderble by the middle class and Poor people in the city. This is because trent the Shies sall locally made products which are within the budget of the economically weaker Recations To illustrate, Shopping malls in at my city sell Clother exorbitant Taites, whereas, the some kind of clothes are available
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been observed
that
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comes
Sumice13 and shopping centers are
being built
instead
of
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Small
Food side shops in the water areas.
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I belive
that such a kind of
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talend
is
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nequctive
to
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longe
extant. The for their reasons for my opinion
are discussed


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Small
Shape in the set to cress The
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fornemmest
one is development of the local economy. As
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people
will
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purchase
from local shops, the
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shopkeepars
will earn substantial
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arenact
of This
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Toome
will generate
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toixes
that will be
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used
by the
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Deverboent
for the progress of the city on hand, if
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the the
local businesses this will social face
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mamy
and
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eumomic
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Probleme


Further
more, the
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Hexe
available in
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small
Shops
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afforderble
by the middle
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class
and Poor
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people
in the city. This is
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because
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trent
the Shies
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sall
locally
made products which are within the budget of the
economically
weaker
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Recations
To illustrate, Shopping malls in at my city sell
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Clother
exorbitant
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Taites
, whereas, the
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some
kind of clothes are
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available

IELTS essay In town and cities large shopping malls are replacing small shops

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
172 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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