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You live in a city, the local internet provider is introducing 5 G technology. The company is conducting a survey that if the 5G communication should be launch or should be avoided as it will increase the electricity

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Keeping the survey in mind, I agree of having 5G technology in the area as faster internet service is a dire need of the community. The advantages overweigh the hike in the internet bill. Year 2020 has seen a lot of changes where the whole world is in quarantine and world’s population is at home. The dependency on the internet services has grown sporadically. From working class to school students to home makers, the internet consumption was increased. We now demand a quicker and faster internet service to be on a conference call or attend a classroom session or watch videos on YouTube. The other advantage of having a better network is connectivity which in return helps the business to grow and swift closure on deadline. Internet now is not a luxury but a necessity. And getting the best of the services will any day help the population of this community. I strongly agree on having the best services as it will make our lives more convenient and connected.

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agree
 of having 5G technology in the area as faster internet You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
service
 is a dire need of the community. The advantages Possible spelling mistake found.overweightover weigh
overweigh
 the hike in the internet bill.

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seen
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a lot of
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changes
 where the whole world is in quarantine and world’s population is at home. The dependency on the internet You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
services
 has grown sporadically
. From working This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 to school students to This word is normally spelled as one.homemakers
home makers
, the internet consumption was increased
. We This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 demand a quicker and faster internet You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
service
 to be on a conference call or attend a classroom session or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 videos on YouTube.

The other advantage of having a better network is connectivity which in return This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 the business to grow and swift closure on deadline. Internet This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 is not a luxury This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 a necessity. And getting the best of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
services
 will any day This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 the population of this community. I strongly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 on having the best You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
services
 as it will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 more convenient and connected. 