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how to ensure that television has a positive impact on children.

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Nowadays, television and its programs are the primary resources of entertainment. Members of the family usually spend a couple of times watching TV either separately or together, and the children are no exception. Watching TV too much makes the parental generation desperately anxious due to its negative influence on children's physical and mental health. Therefore, the adults have to find out solutions on the spot for children to have the limitation of watching TV so much and make sure television will be purely positive for them. The first method is taking control of the materials shown in the program they watch. The parent should ensure that the programs they provide must be pretty suitable for their age. The educational programs should be encouraged to show more. Seeing these resources can help the children establish moral virtues and well-behaviour. In modern times, with advanced technology, there are a large number of channels yielded for the kids with the aim of practising them learn helpful knowledge. In contrast, parents should be highly cautious, avoiding showing inappropriate programs such as violent films, horror movies or sexual content. Accessing these kinds of resources affects their awareness and lead to aggressive behaviour or issues related to mental health. Another essential commission is that the adults have to manage the amount of time their child spends in front of the TV. Watching TV for many continuous hours can affect their eyesight, which is considered one of the causes of visual impairment. Thus, it is of paramount importance for parents to regulate the amount of time their offspring spends on TV and make a balance between watching TV and other activities. Remaining seated for extended periods may result in social isolation, so parents should create every opportunity for their child to experience extracurricular activities. They can pique avid interest in sports, languages to their children. The activities outdoor can help children's minds comfortable and develop maximumly critical thinking. Furthermore, the experience can be good in helping children make friends. They communicate face-to-face with the other children, which weakens the isolation bonds. By and large, there is a denial that television is a useful tool for both entertainment and learning. However, it might cause some unwanted results if the users do not make use of it reasonably. Controlling the type of shows and managing the amount of TV watching time and outdoor activities are effective measures to demonstrate that television positively impacts children.
Nowadays,
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television
and its
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programs
are the primary resources of entertainment. Members of the family
usually
spend a couple of
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times
watching TV either
separately
or together, and the
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children
are no exception. Watching TV too much
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makes
the parental generation
desperately
anxious due to its
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negative
influence on children's physical and mental health.
Therefore
, the adults
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have to
find out solutions on the spot for
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children
to have the limitation of watching TV
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so
much and
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make
sure
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television
will be
purely
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positive
for them.

The
first
method is taking control of the materials shown in the
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program
they
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watch
. The
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parent
should ensure that the
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programs
they provide
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must
be pretty suitable for their age.
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The
educational
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programs
should
be encouraged
to
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show
more. Seeing these resources can
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help
the
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children
establish moral virtues and
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well-behaviour
. In modern
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times
, with advanced technology, there are
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a large number of
channels yielded for the kids with the aim of
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practising
them learn helpful knowledge.
In contrast
,
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parents
should be
highly
cautious, avoiding showing inappropriate
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programs
such as violent films, horror movies or sexual content. Accessing these kinds of resources affects their awareness and lead to aggressive
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behaviour
or issues related to mental health.

Another essential commission is that the adults
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have to
manage the amount of
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time
their child spends in front of the TV. Watching TV for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
continuous hours can affect their eyesight, which
is considered
one of the causes of visual impairment.
Thus
, it is of paramount importance for
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parents
to regulate the amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
their offspring spends on TV and
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make
a balance between watching TV and other
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activities
. Remaining seated for extended periods may result in social isolation,
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so
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parents
should create every opportunity for their child to experience extracurricular
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activities
. They can pique avid interest in sports, languages to their
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children
. The
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activities
outdoor can
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help
children's minds comfortable and develop
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maximumly
critical thinking.
Furthermore
, the experience can be
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good in helping
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children
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make
friends. They communicate face-to-face with the other
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children
, which weakens the isolation bonds.

By and large, there is a denial that
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television
is a useful tool for both entertainment and learning.
However
, it might cause
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some
unwanted results if the users do not
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make
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of it
reasonably
. Controlling the type of
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shows
and managing the amount of TV watching
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time
and outdoor
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activities
are effective measures to demonstrate that
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television
positively
impacts
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children
.
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IELTS essay how to ensure that television has a positive impact on children.

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