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How to build your own water clock

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The figures illustrates how to set up a water clock. Overall, there are 7 steps, consisting of a faucet, letter L-stand, 1 plastic bottle which tape on the letter L-stand with a hole on its side near its neck area as well the hole on the bottom, and the other plastic bottle has its neck cut off. First, put the L-stand under the faucet and cover the hole on the first plastic bootle with finger so the water would not drop from the bottle. Then, turn on the faucet until the water fill top bottle to overflow and come out from the straw. This straw would keep the water from overflowing amd help it to maintain at a constant level. After the water does not come out anymore from the straw, moved away your fingers and let the water drop into the second bottle which is put at the bottom of the stand. At this stage, the second plastic bottle can be marked with pens after one or two minutes of dripping at levels of water. When the second plastic bottle is full of water, it can be emptied and the whole process can be repeated as in the first step.
The figures
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illustrates
how to set up a
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water
clock.
Overall
, there are 7 steps, consisting of a faucet, letter L-stand, 1
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plastic
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bottle
which tape on the letter L-stand with a hole on its side near its neck area
as well
the hole on the bottom, and the other
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plastic
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bottle
has its neck
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cut
off.

First
, put the L-stand under the faucet and cover the hole on the
first
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plastic
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bootle
with finger
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so
the
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water
would not drop from the
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bottle
. Then, turn on the faucet until the
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water
fill top
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bottle
to overflow and
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come
out from the straw. This straw would
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keep
the
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water
from overflowing
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amd
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help
it to maintain at a constant level.

After the
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water
does not
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come
out
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anymore
from the straw,
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moved
away your fingers and
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let
the
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water
drop into the second
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bottle
which
is put
at the bottom of the stand. At this stage, the second
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plastic
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bottle
can
be marked
with pens after one or two minutes of dripping at levels of
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water
. When the second
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plastic
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bottle
is full of
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water
, it can
be emptied
and the whole process can
be repeated
as in the
first
step.
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IELTS essay How to build your own water clock

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
201 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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