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how to be a good digitall citizen

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Somehow now in the online world, there are a lot of rude and disrespectful people that annoy everyone else, they also think of themselves as the best, or stigmatize and make fun of others besides them there are also some departments that specialize in hacking other people's personal information to serve bad things but their common actions are not a good resident. Now I will show you some nice actions that a good citizen will do, at first, they will always respect others and think of other feelings, always check the information before post it online will be a good action for yourself and other because maybe in the future you will getting famous who know if your fan saw those stupid things that you post 10 or 20 years earlier and when they saw that that mean you gonna lose the job and your social status. Being helpful online will help you turn in to a good digital citizen.
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people
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departments that specialize in hacking
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people
's personal information to serve
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bad
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their common actions are not a
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resident.
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citizen will do, at
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feelings, always
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check
the information
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before
post it online will be a
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good
action for yourself and
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other
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because
maybe in the future you will
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famous
who know if your fan
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saw
those stupid things that you post 10 or 20 years earlier and when they
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saw
that that mean you
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gonna
lose the job and your social status. Being helpful online will
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help
you turn in to a
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digital citizen.
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IELTS essay how to be a good digitall citizen

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
160 words
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