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How to avoid air pollution.

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In todays modern life where new texnalogy is developing rapidly. We can reduce pollution with the help of number of ways. I will describe these methods, in my essay below. Fristly, bikes are helpful to decrease pollution. For instence if we drive car less. This is because cars damage emits gas. Also we saw plants and trees since plants will include corbanate anhydride gas and exclude ciclorod gas. We else contrive a sump either we can a waste bins as there all of for air pollution. We should a less fictories, whether we must moved them into a remote area. It is good for all of us I agree upper opinion since their number of right idea. If we do together this works then it is good for everyone so we will prevent damage.
In
todays
modern life where new
texnalogy
is developing
rapidly
. We can
reduce
pollution with the
help
of number of ways. I will
describe
these methods, in my essay below.
Fristly
, bikes are helpful to decrease pollution. For
instence
if we drive car less. This is
because
cars damage emits gas.
Also
we
saw
plants and trees since plants will include
corbanate
anhydride
gas and exclude
ciclorod
gas.
We else
contrive a sump either we can a waste bins as there all of for air pollution. We should a less
fictories
, whether we
must
moved
them into a remote area. It is
good
for all of us I
agree
upper opinion since their number of right
idea
. If we do together this works then it is
good
for everyone
so
we will
prevent
damage.
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IELTS essay How to avoid air pollution.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
134 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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