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Relationship and growing up

Relationship and growing up Knr99
When I was teenager the relationship between me and my parents was great but nowadays we seem to do argue and can be a lot of conflict between us. The relationship between us has broken down and I'm struggling with them, I fell that causes conflict between us my tastes are different. and I hopfull that this relation is close. There is a very close bond between my mothet and my young brother. I really admire the relationship between them.
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the relationship between me and my parents was great
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nowadays we seem to do argue and can be
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a lot of
conflict between us. The relationship between us has broken down and I'm struggling with them, I fell that causes conflict between us my tastes are
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different
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and
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hopfull
that this relation is close. There is a
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close bond between my
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and my young brother. I
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admire the relationship between them.

IELTS essay Relationship and growing up

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
80 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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