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is Boycotting a company is an effective way to bring about change?

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Boycotting company products or services of a company is an efficient way to bring change because of the care about reputation. A famous story through the years is that of Rosa Parks, who in 1955 refused to stand and leave a bus seat for a white passenger. It was a requirement at that time. A civil rights activist called Jo Ann Robinson organized a Monday boycott against Montgomery Bus Company. It went on for a year attracting the likes of Martin Luther King Jr till the segregation laws in bases were declared unconstitutional. Since then boycotting a company became an effective way of bringing change. Boycotting a company succeeds if it has a good reputation that is beginning to decline. Enough negative press report that a boycott generates can make a company shudder and agree to demanded changes. The negative publicity will cause a drop in the stock prices if the company does not act. It will finally agree to demands to prevent a possible collapse and save face. Boycott organizers might be ready to sustain it for many months until the management realizes the gravity of a boycott.
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products or services of a
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company
is an efficient way to bring
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change
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story through the years is that of Rosa Parks, who in 1955 refused to stand and
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leave
a bus seat for a white passenger. It was a requirement at that time. A civil rights activist called Jo Ann Robinson organized a Monday
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boycott
against Montgomery Bus
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Company
. It went on for a year attracting the likes of Martin Luther King Jr till the segregation laws in bases
were declared
unconstitutional.
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then boycotting a
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became an effective way of bringing
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change
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Boycotting a
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succeeds if it has a
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good
reputation
that is
beginning to decline.
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Enough
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negative
press report that a
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generates can
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make
a
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company
shudder and
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agree
to demanded
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changes
. The
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negative
publicity will cause a drop in the stock prices if the
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company
does not act. It will
finally
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agree
to
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demands
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prevent
a possible collapse and save face.
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organizers might be ready to sustain it for
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many
months until the management realizes the gravity of a
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IELTS essay is Boycotting a company is an effective way to bring about change?

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189 words
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