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How rainwater is reused for domestic purposes

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The information regarding the usage of rainwater by using different steps is illustrated by the aid of process chart. Overall it can be clearly seen that water is collected in the dam at the end it purified water is transferred to the water bodies process is completed nearly by 6 steps. To begin water is collected from the rain in the dam after that it is passed treatment plant for purification and hazardous particles are removed which are Harm organism then it is passed to home for the purpose of drinking water some water is collected in the tank which is situated in the houses then it is used in the purpose of domestic work. Moreover wastewater produced by the houses is passed to the different wastewater treatment plant excess water by the tank is released in water by these such as river and lakes is also released into river which is collected in the ground and empty space finally this process and in river

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is collected
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 in the purpose of domestic work.

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