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Why students prefer studying online over on campus mode?

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Owing to the convenience an online class offers, students tend to opt for virtual mode of attending a class over the on-campus mode. Rather than waking up early, getting ready and travelling kilometers for an offline class, students, nowadays, prefer studying in their comfort zone. Furthermore, students save a lot of time, which in turn helps them focus better, by taking part in an online class instead of going to the university. For instance, earlier, the online certification and specialization courses were specially fabricated for working professionals but now their main business target are students. Business people are coming up with applications and websites that offer a variety of courses even for a 5 year old. In short, because of its ability to fit so easily in any schedule and save enormous amounts of travelling and waiting time, online classes are becoming a better option than an offline class.
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IELTS essay Why students prefer studying online over on campus mode?

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149 words
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