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The presented process illustrates the seven stages of bricks making process from digging clay to deliver bricks at the construction site. To comment with, the clay is collected by the digger machine from land. This clay is then placed onto the metal grid where small pieces of clay are separated from large pieces in which roller assist. after this, sand and water are added into the mixture for the making of bricks materials. then the bricks are made by two methods. The first is a wire cutter and the second one is mould methods and makes the row shape of the bricks. After a while, raw shaped bricks are placed into a drying oven for dehydration for 1 to 2 days. then the dried raw bricks are kept in the kiln. firstly place it into kline under moderate temperature 200 degrees Celsius to 900 degrees Celsius. Secondly, in high temperature at hundred degrees to 100 degrees, Celsius. after that placed into the cooling chamber for 2 to 3 days. Letter on, it is placed onto large plates for packaging. Eventually, it is delivered to the required areas by truck.
The presented process illustrates the seven stages of
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bricks
making process from digging
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clay
to deliver
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bricks
at the construction site.

To comment with, the
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clay
is collected
by the digger machine from land. This
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clay
is then
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placed
onto the metal grid where
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small
pieces of
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clay
are separated
from large pieces in which roller assist.
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after
this, sand and water are
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added
into the mixture for the making of
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bricks
materials.
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then
the
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bricks
are made
by two methods. The
first
is a wire cutter and the second one is
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mould
methods and
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makes
the row shape of the bricks.

After a while, raw shaped
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bricks
are
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placed
into a drying oven for dehydration for 1 to 2 days.
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then
the dried raw
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bricks
are
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kept
in the kiln.
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firstly
place it into
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kline
under moderate temperature 200
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degrees
Celsius to 900
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degrees
Celsius.
Secondly
, in high temperature at
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hundred
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degrees
to 100
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degrees
, Celsius.
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after
that
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placed
into the cooling chamber for 2 to 3 days. Letter on, it is
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placed
onto large plates for packaging.
Eventually
, it
is delivered
to the required areas by truck.
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IELTS essay The first thing I did was to be a part of this is the first of its kind in the world of difference between a man and a woman who is a member of the.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
189 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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