Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

How People to build up their relationships in general.

How People to build up their relationships in general. xxVJ1

People receive parents love since they know that there is a new life coming to join them as a family member. Parents even started communicate with babe before they born. During the pregnant they will become a idealistic person. They imagine the child how to group up, for instant, how the kid meet their spouse? What kind of wedding it will going to be like in the future? Before the life events happens that they have to rise them till they are full slef-reliant in their life. Most Asia cultures are conventional, therefore, children has been taught that they have to well-behaved in general. According to parents expectations, the young kinds has to tolerants the pressure from this family burden. Thus, when children become a teenager which is leds them more sencentive and vulnerable in emoations, also lack of flexible thought and slow racts about the unpredictable siuations. The home education is influence people's mind and behaveior, also indierct effective to how the people cooperative with others as a team, like work with classmates, silbings and colleagus. The bad relationships influence people's efficient while they are learing or working in reality. At the end, how to build up a transparent relationships and create a enormous efficient environment the communicate is the pivotal task in our life.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
 receive parents This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 since they know that there is a new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 coming to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 them as a family member. Parents even This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 communicate with babe This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 they Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean "bore"?bore
born
. During the pregnant they will become Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 idealistic person. They imagine the child how to group up, for instant, how the kid This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 their spouse? What kind of wedding it will The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "go"go
going
 to be like in the future? “Before” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Before
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
 happens that they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 rise them till they are full Possible spelling mistake found.
slef-reliant
 in their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
. Most Asia cultures are conventional, therefore
, children has been taught
 that they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 well-behaved in general
. According to parents expectations, the young kinds This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
Possible spelling mistake found.toleranttole rants
tolerants
 the pressure from this family burden. Thus
, when children become a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenileadolescent
teenager
 which is Possible spelling mistake found.LEDsledlessleadslegsLeeds
leds
 them more Possible spelling mistake found.incentive
sencentive
 and vulnerable in Possible spelling mistake found.emotions
emoations
, also
 lack of flexible This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 and slow Possible spelling mistake found.racesactsfactsratsActsreacts
racts
 about the unpredictable Possible spelling mistake found.situations
siuations
. The home education is influence This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
's mind and Possible spelling mistake found.behavior
behaveior
, also
Possible spelling mistake found.indirect
indierct
 effective to how the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 cooperative with others as a team, like work with classmates, Possible spelling mistake found.siblings
silbings
 and Possible spelling mistake found.colleaguescolleague
colleagus
. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 relationships influence This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
's efficient while they are Possible spelling mistake found.leadingleavinglearningwearingbearinghearing
learing
 or working in reality. At the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
, how to build up a transparent relationships and create Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 enormous efficient environment After 'the', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'communicate' is correct. If 'communicate' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
the communicate
 is the pivotal task in our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
. 