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How patient evaluated different services at three health services

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This table shows how different services at three health centres are evaluated by patients. In general, each centre is highly evaluated in various aspects of services. Longston Centre and Marchbank Centre are best at doctors’ service, but still a bit low compared to Peveril Centre. Peveril Centre is highly assessed at doctors’ service, booking appointments and especially in the response to concernment. Overall, Peveril Centre is evaluated much better than the other two centres, which shows that this health centre’s services are wonderful
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IELTS essay How patient evaluated different services at three health services

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1 paragraphs
82 words
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