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How often do you visit grandmother

How often do you visit grandmother VBR1D
How often do you visit your grandparents Depending on the individual plan, we see the grandparents when it is convenient to meet up with. The house's grandparents live about 30 minutes away, so, we meet up about once a week. When we leave, we have to make sure they know we’re coming back in a week. In contracts, when we are too busy, we will visit with a nice phone call, say twice or three a week.
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do you visit your grandparents

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see
the grandparents when it is convenient to
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meet
up with. The
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's grandparents
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about 30 minutes away,
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, we
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meet
up about once a week. When we
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leave
, we
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have to
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make
sure they know we’re coming back in a week. In contracts, when we are too busy, we will visit with a nice phone call, say twice or three a week.
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IELTS essay How often do you visit grandmother

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
77 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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