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How leather goods are produced

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The diagam illustrates the process of leather production. which is used for making leather items. Overall ，it is clear that this going through Six stages ，which is starting from Drying aninal skin and ending in polishing. Firstly，Animal skin is got dry by drying process then it is transferred into factory to do washing, soaking ，flattening ，Soaking and polishing。The skin washed using water and lime afterwards Soak into lime before the fourth stage which is flattening。Fifthly 2nd time animal skin got Soak by using water and Tennin vegetable matter. Subsequently made into polish substance by doing polishing. Finally ，it is transferred to another factory to produce leather type products.

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diagam
 illustrates the process of leather production. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhich
which
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for making leather items. Overall
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 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that this going through Six stages Possible spelling mistake found.which
，which
 is starting from Drying Possible spelling mistake found.animalAnibalanginal
aninal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurcoatingcrustsurfacejackethusk
skin
 and ending in polishing. The character '，' is not a standard comma, although it can look like a comma. Use "Firstly, Animal".Firstly, Animal
Firstly，Animal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurcoatingcrustsurfacejackethusk
skin
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 dry by drying process then it is transferred
 into factory to do washing, soaking Possible spelling mistake found.flattening
，flattening
Possible spelling mistake found.soaking
，Soaking
 and Possible spelling mistake found.
polishing。The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurcoatingcrustsurfacejackethusk
skin
 washed using water and lime afterwards Soak into lime This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the fourth stage which is flattening。Fifthly
 2nd time animal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurcoatingcrustsurfacejackethusk
skin
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 Soak by using water and Possible spelling mistake found.TennisTanninTenpinRenninTenn in
Tennin
 vegetable matter. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Subsequently,
Subsequently
 made into polish substance by The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "going polishing".going polishing
doing polishing
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
Finally
Possible spelling mistake found.ithitbitfitsitkit
，it
is transferred
 to another factory to produce leather type products. 