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To improve your health,we should do exercises. Do you agree?

To improve your health, we should do exercises. Do you agree? Mmb2o
Health is Wealth. In this world, health is the most precious things. You can't buy health with money. If you can't buy, what should you do to maintain your health? There have still a lot of ways to take care of your health. Eating healthy dish, fresh fruit which was grown without fertilizer, drinking six glasses of water a day, sleeping enough and doing exercises can maintain your health. Doing exercises and sports gives a lot of advantages for your body and health. You should do at least 30mins a day. After you finished exercises, you become active and feel healthier. Don't forget to do exercise to live long lives.
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is Wealth. In this world,
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is the most precious things. You can't
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with money. If you can't
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, what should you do to maintain your health?

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. Eating healthy dish, fresh fruit which
was grown
without fertilizer, drinking six glasses of water a day, sleeping
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and doing
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exercises
can maintain your
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health
. Doing
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exercises
and sports gives
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a lot of
advantages for your body and health.

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exercises
, you become active and feel healthier. Don't forget to do
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IELTS essay To improve your health, we should do exercises. Do you agree?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
110 words
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