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How itvfine thevdhyb yfhht yjfbjg yghhfg? Yhrhyunbthv

How itvfine thevdhyb yfhht yjfbjg yghhfg? Yhrhyunbthv JlE60
The process shows how sugar is made from the sugar cane plant. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that this natural and man-made process involves 3 main stages beginning with initial harvesting, followed by a chemical transformation, and finally separation into the end product of sugar. The first stage is natural and begins with sugar cane being grown over a 12 – 18 month period. The plant is then harvested either by hand or large, industrial farming machinery. From that point, the stalks are crushed in a grinder which results in raw sugar cane juice. The juice is then run through a limestone filter and poured into an evaporator during which time it is heated, reduced and becomes a syrup. The syrup is next separated from the sugar crystals using a centrifuge prior to being dried and cooled in its final form as sugar.
The process
shows
how
sugar
is made
from the
sugar
cane plant. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is
readily
apparent that this natural and
man
-made process involves 3 main stages beginning with initial harvesting, followed by a chemical transformation, and
finally
separation into the
end
product of sugar.

The
first
stage is natural and
begins
with
sugar
cane
being grown
over a 12 –
18 month
period. The plant is then harvested either by hand or large, industrial farming machinery. From that point, the stalks
are crushed
in a grinder which results in raw
sugar
cane juice.

The juice is then run through a limestone filter and poured into an evaporator during which time it
is heated
,
reduced
and becomes a syrup. The syrup is
next
separated from the
sugar
crystals using a centrifuge prior to
being dried
and cooled in its final form as
sugar
.
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IELTS essay How itvfine thevdhyb yfhht yjfbjg yghhfg? Yhrhyunbthv

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