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How is the character of the people living in thr country side,different from thst of thr people living in the city how is their life different.what should government do ti encourage people to kive in coutry side.

How is the character of the people living in thr country side, different from thst of thr people living in the city how is their life different. what should government do ti encourage people to kive in coutry side. jkKa
in this contemporary era, people have different options to live in the world. people live in their suitable place, according to their needs and requirements. in this essay i will discuss about village and city accommodation and at the last, which type of step government should taken for encourage people to live in village side. firstly illustrate the village accommodation, simple and also hard working people are live in village. mostly religious people are there so basically they have manner and hospitable. village's people are less educated but they have other basic information which are more useful. not much needs and desire and also expectation are less because they live and stay with simple basic needs. they can never afford the luxuriest life style and more facilities like microwave, washing machine, refrigerator and television. poor rodes are there. bank and transportation fecilities are provided but not enough for people. furthermore, they celebrate their occasion and other festival in traditional way. secondly elucidate the city accommodation, city's life is so fast. people always try for earn more money and that's the reason city's people are live with stress. they are very money minded and selfishness are more in people mind. prograssive people more and they people increase compitision level for the other people. more school, collages and extra course are available for the younghsters. huge amount of opportunity are present. enterntainmemt needs are here for the every needed person. there and other facility like malls, theator, club and sport academy are mostly present in city. however, air pollution are spred and that pollution congested residency area. thirdly brief description about government encourage people to live in village side, government should built more higher education shool. provide dissimilar facilities like banking transportation, mini shops, and garden. instablish the farmer sector and make beneficial rule for farmers. set up the industry connection to connect nearest town and cities which are helpful for village's people. improve communication facility which are easily use and get benefit from it. increase a hospital management in village. to conclude, cities and village are muvh different as per they life style and needs. village life style are comfortable for each and every person. if people desire live long in the world.
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in
this contemporary era,
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have
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different
options to
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live
in the world.
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people
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live
in their suitable place, according to their
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needs
and requirements.
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in
this essay
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will discuss about
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village
and city accommodation and at the last, which type of step
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government
should
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taken
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people
to
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live
in
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village
side.

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firstly
illustrate the
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village
accommodation, simple and
also
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hard working
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people
are
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live
in
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village
.
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mostly
religious
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people
are there
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so
basically
they have manner and hospitable.
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village
's
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people
are less educated
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they have
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other
basic information which are more useful.
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not
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much
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needs
and desire and
also
expectation are less
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they
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live
and stay with simple basic
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needs
.
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they
can never afford the
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luxuriest
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life
style and more facilities like microwave, washing machine, refrigerator and television.
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poor
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rodes
are there.
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bank
and transportation
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fecilities
are provided
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not
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for
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people
.
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furthermore
, they celebrate their occasion and
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other
festival in traditional way.

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secondly
elucidate the city accommodation, city's
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life
is
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so
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fast
.
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people
always try for earn more money and that's the reason city's
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people
are
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live
with
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stress
.
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they
are
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very
money minded and selfishness are more in
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people
mind.
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prograssive
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people
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more and
they
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people
increase
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compitision
level for the
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other
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people
.
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more
school, collages and extra course are available for the
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younghsters
.
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huge
amount of opportunity are present.
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enterntainmemt
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needs
are here for the every needed person.
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there
and
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other
facility like malls,
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theator
, club and sport academy are
mostly
present in city.
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however
, air pollution are
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spred
and that pollution congested residency area.

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thirdly
brief description about
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government
encourage
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people
to
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live
in
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village
side,
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government
should
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built
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more higher
education
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shool
.
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provide
dissimilar facilities like banking transportation, mini shops, and garden.
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instablish
the farmer sector and
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make
beneficial
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rule
for farmers.
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set
up the industry connection to connect
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nearest
town and
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cities
which are helpful for village's
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people
.
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improve
communication facility which are
easily
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use
and
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get
benefit from it. increase a hospital management in village.

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to
conclude,
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cities
and
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village
are
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muvh
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different
as per they
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life
style and
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needs
.
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village
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life
style are comfortable for each and every person.
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if
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people
desire
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live
long in the world.
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IELTS essay How is the character of the people living in thr country side, different from thst of thr people living in the city how is their life different. what should government do ti encourage people to kive in coutry side.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
372 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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