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HOW INSTANT NOODLES ARE MANUFACTURED.

HOW INSTANT NOODLES ARE MANUFACTURED. g5eQ1

THERE ARE EIGHT PHASE IN THIS MANUFACTURE. FIRST, WE SHOULD TRANSPORT THE STORAGE SILOS USING TRUCK. IN THIS TRUCK, THERE ARE A LOT OF AMOUNT OF FLOUR. SECOND, THE MACHINE MIXES THE FLOUR WITH WATER AND OIL. THEN, THE STUFF IS SENT ON THE ROLLERS. THIRD, THE STUFF BECOME FLAT. FOURTH, THE DOUGH SHEETS IS CUT AND BECOME DOUGH STRIPS. FIFTH, THE STRIPS CHANGE THE SHAPE. THEY BECOME NOODLE DISCS. WE FINALLY CAN UNDERSTAND WHAT THE MANUFACTURE ARE MAKING. SIXTH, NOODLES DISCS ARE COOKED.

THERE ARE EIGHT Possible agreement error. Did you mean "phases"?Phases
PHASE
 IN THIS MANUFACTURE.

FIRST
, WE SHOULD TRANSPORT THE STORAGE SILOS USING TRUCK. IN THIS TRUCK, THERE ARE Possible agreement error. The noun AMOUNT seems to be countable; consider using: "a LOT of amounts".A LOT of amounts
A LOT OF AMOUNT
 OF FLOUR.

SECOND, THE MACHINE MIXES THE FLOUR WITH WATER AND OIL. THEN, THE STUFF IS This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
SENT
 ON THE ROLLERS.

THIRD, THE STUFF BECOME FLAT.

FOURTH, THE DOUGH SHEETS IS This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
CUT
 AND BECOME DOUGH STRIPS.

FIFTH, THE STRIPS This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
CHANGE
 THE SHAPE. THEY BECOME NOODLE DISCS. WE FINALLY
 CAN UNDERSTAND WHAT THE MANUFACTURE ARE MAKING.

SIXTH, NOODLES DISCS ARE COOKED
. 