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How improve of learning foreign languages

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In last decades learning foreign languages are considerably increasing. Especially development countries' languages. I think all yongest people must learn some foreign languages. Because the memory would be strong who knows foreign languages also broaden mind. Due to the fact that there are numbers of learning foreign languages. Furthermore we must begin to learn when at a childhood middle 10 or 12 ages. After that we could watch more films in the language we are trying to learn. For this reason our all skills are improved. Also we should listen to and sing songs in the language. Important side is we should tried to live a foreign language's atmosphere. Consequently so we must make more use of newspapers, magazines and other authentic reading materials such as brochures and leflets. In which we summarize our opinion, learning foreign language is opened evry door we want.
In last decades learning
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languages
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considerably
increasing.
Especially
development countries' languages.

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foreign
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languages
.
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Because
the memory would be strong who knows
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foreign
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languages
also
broaden mind. Due to the fact that there are numbers of learning
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foreign
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languages
.
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Furthermore
we
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to learn when at a childhood middle 10 or 12 ages.
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that we could
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more films in the
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language
we are trying to learn.
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our all
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skills
are
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improved
.
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Also
we should listen to and sing songs in the
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language
.
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side is we should
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tried
to
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a
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foreign
language's atmosphere.
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Consequently
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so
we
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must
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more
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use
of newspapers, magazines and other authentic reading materials such as brochures and
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leflets
.

In which we summarize our opinion, learning
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language
is opened
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door we want.

IELTS essay How improve of learning foreign languages

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
144 words
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