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What can local people do to help tourists enjoy their visit?

What can local people do to help tourists enjoy their visit? nRjpR
Meeting local people is an important part of any travel experience. Interacting with the locals is a great way to experience the culture and the lifestyle people have. Local people can make your trip special and memorable, especially by sharing more about their authentic local cuisine and traditions they have. Being hospitable to tourists is a great way to make them feel comfortable during their trip. Another thing that locals can do is sharing more about their culture and customs as this will help tourists understand local etiquette and as a result they will enjoy and appreciate their trip even more.
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your trip special and memorable,
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by sharing more about their authentic
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local
cuisine and traditions they have. Being hospitable to tourists is a great way to
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make
them feel comfortable during their trip. Another thing that
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locals
can do is sharing more about their culture and customs as this will
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tourists understand
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etiquette and
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they will enjoy and appreciate their trip even more.
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IELTS essay What can local people do to help tourists enjoy their visit?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
101 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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