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How I spent my day on Saturday

How I spent my day on Saturday VPqMQ

My parents went on a IELTS test and had to leave me alone for 8 hours. They left some food for me on the kitchen platform. I played a lot of video games and my grandmother called me and was forcing me to eat food, at last I had to eat, after eating I continued on to play video games. Me and my friend Mohamed planed a Minecraft manhunt, but he did not have time so I played with one more friend of mine who's name is Ahmed. I joined his world and decided to speedrun Minecraft together. When my parents came back, I kept on playing. After food I played in the snow. When I came back home I was getting board so I made a drawing for my mother which was a rabbit.

My parents went on a IELTS This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
 and had to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 me alone for 8 hours. They This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 food for me on the kitchen platform. I played This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 video games and my grandmother called me and was forcing me to eat food, at last I had to eat, after eating I continued on to play video games. When referring to yourself and somebody else, put their name first. Also check whether the nominative form "I" is required here.I
Me
 and my friend Mohamed planed a Minecraft manhunt, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 he did not have time This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I played with one more friend of mine Did you mean "whose"?whose
who's
 name is Ahmed
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatedfused
joined
 his world and decided to Possible spelling mistake found.speed run
speedrun
 Minecraft together. When my parents came back, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 on playing. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
The comma is probably missing here: "food, I".food, I
food I
 played in the snow. When I came back home I was getting board This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I made a drawing for my mother which was a rabbit. 