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Sex education in Philippines

Sex education in Philippines 70R65
Sex Education helps people to gain their knowledge about sex related issues, that many people considered forbidden. This will aid people’s ignorance in sex and sexuality by giving information, skills and motivation to make the right decisions they could have. Sex Education plays role in minimizing the pregnancy in our youth. Considering that it covers lots of topic such as human development, relationships, personal skills, sexual behavior, sexual health, and society and culture. It explores values and beliefs about those topics, that will beneficial to us in navigating relationships and managing our sexual health. Sex Education provides healthy relationships among teens because it increases our knowledge in human relation, sexual issues and helps us navigating healthy relationships to prevent violence abuses inside a relationship and avoid unplanned pregnancy among teenagers.
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Education
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helps
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people
to gain their knowledge about
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sex
related issues, that
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many
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people
considered forbidden. This will aid
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people
’s ignorance in
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sex
and sexuality by giving information,
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skills
and motivation to
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make
the right decisions they could have.
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Sex
Education plays role in minimizing the pregnancy in our youth. Considering that it covers
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lots of topic
such as human development,
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relationships
, personal
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skills
,
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sexual
behavior,
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sexual
health, and society and culture. It explores values and beliefs about those topics, that will beneficial to us in navigating
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relationships
and managing our
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sexual
health.
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Sex
Education provides healthy
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relationships
among teens
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because
it increases our knowledge in human relation,
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sexual
issues and
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helps
us
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navigating
healthy
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relationships
to
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prevent
violence abuses inside a
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relationship
and avoid unplanned pregnancy among
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teenagers
.
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IELTS essay Sex education in Philippines

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
130 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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