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Some people like to eat at food stands or restaurants, while other people prepare and eat at home. Discuss both sides and decide where vou would choose to eat. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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People's opinions differ with regard to whether they prefer going to eat at restaurants or cooking by themselves at home. After considering several aspects of the issue, I am convinced that restaurants are the better choice of the two. Eating at restaurants has an evident advantage over cooking at home: it saves time, which too often is equal to money. After a long day's exhausting work, cooking at home becomes, arguably, the most horrible thing to ordinary people. To finish this task, they need to accomplish a number of sub-tasks, including buying materials, preparing them, cooking and serving, which not only are difficult to carry out but also consume a lot of precious time. Restaurants. on the other hand, have well-trained staff, who are able to provide us with an agreeable meal with the upmost efficiencv. All we have to do is to wait, to enjoy and to pay the bill As different restaurants are owned and run by different people, the foods they serve are of various tastes，which ensure that our choices are seldom limited. Take the city I live in, Beijing, for example. As the capital of China, this city has restaurants run by people from all over the country, and thus the features of different places are represented on their menus. People preferring spicy food are welcomed to Sichuan-flavor restaurants, and people favoring noodles are always satisfied in a Shanxi restaurants. In comparison, however talented my mom is at cooking, she is unable to serve, among many others. Italian food. which is handy at restaurant just down our apartment While those who choose to eat at home do have a point in their concern about the health problem with eating out, this problem is not completely hopeless. Well-known restaurants often serve clean, healthy food, and many of them even invite consumers to supervise their kitchen. The governments are also implementing more strict regulations to protect the rights of consumers. Hence, eating outside might not be as unhealthy as before, but will remain a convenient and enjoyable experience. Both sides considered, I would choose to eat at restaurants as they provide timely and diverse food without threatening my health, yet those ill-famed restaurants are clearly never on my list of visits
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's opinions differ with regard to whether they prefer going to eat at
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restaurants
or cooking by themselves at home. After considering several aspects of the issue, I
am convinced
that
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restaurants
are the better choice of the two.

Eating at
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restaurants
has an evident advantage over cooking at home: it saves time, which too
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often
is equal to money. After a long day's exhausting work, cooking at home becomes,
arguably
, the most horrible thing to ordinary
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people
. To finish this task, they need to accomplish a number of sub-tasks, including buying materials, preparing them, cooking and serving, which not
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only
are difficult to carry out
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but
also
consume
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a lot of
precious time.
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Restaurants
.
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on
the other hand, have well-trained staff, who are able to provide us with an agreeable meal with the upmost
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efficiencv
. All we
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have to
do is to wait, to enjoy and to pay the
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bill


As
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different
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restaurants
are
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owned
and run by
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different
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people
, the
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foods
they serve are of various
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ensure that our choices are seldom limited. Take the city I
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live
in, Beijing,
for example
. As the capital of China, this city has
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restaurants
run by
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people
from all over the country, and
thus
the features of
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different
places
are represented
on their menus.
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People
preferring spicy
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food
are welcomed
to Sichuan-flavor
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restaurants
, and
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people
favoring noodles are always satisfied in a Shanxi
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restaurants
.
In comparison
,
however
talented my mom is at cooking, she is unable to serve, among
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many
others. Italian
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food
.
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which
is handy at
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restaurant
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just
down our
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apartment


While those who choose to eat at home do have a point in their concern about the health problem with eating out, this problem is not completely hopeless. Well-known
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restaurants
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often
serve clean, healthy
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food
, and
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many
of them even invite consumers to supervise their kitchen. The
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governments
are
also
implementing more strict regulations to protect the rights of consumers.
Hence
, eating outside might not be as unhealthy as
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before
,
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but
will remain a convenient and enjoyable experience.

Both sides considered, I would choose to eat at
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restaurants
as they provide timely and diverse
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food
without threatening my health,
yet
those ill-famed
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restaurants
are
clearly
never on my list of visits
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IELTS essay Some people like to eat at food stands or restaurants, while other people prepare and eat at home.

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372 words
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