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How has your hometown changed over the years?

How has your hometown changed over the years? Q5PaP
It has developed much better public transport, especially the metro, which has really improved the overall accessibility of the city. In the suburb, there have been a few improvements as well: several new chain stores and out-of-town supermarkets have appeared, which we didn’t have before. It has developed much better public transport, especially the metro, which has really improved the overall accessibility of the city. In the suburb, there have been a few improvements as well: several new chain stores and out-of-town supermarkets have appeared, which we didn’t have before. It has developed much better public transport, especially the metro, which has really improved the overall accessibility of the city. In the suburb, there have been a few improvements as well: several new chain stores and out-of-town supermarkets have appeared, which we didn’t have before.
It has developed much better public transport,
especially
the metro, which has
really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
the
overall
accessibility of the city. In the suburb, there have been a few improvements
as well
: several new chain stores and out-of-town supermarkets have appeared, which we didn’t have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
. It has developed much better public transport,
especially
the metro, which has
really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
the
overall
accessibility of the city. In the suburb, there have been a few improvements
as well
: several new chain stores and out-of-town supermarkets have appeared, which we didn’t have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
.

It has developed much better public transport,
especially
the metro, which has
really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
the
overall
accessibility of the city. In the suburb, there have been a few improvements
as well
: several new chain stores and out-of-town supermarkets have appeared, which we didn’t have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
.
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IELTS essay How has your hometown changed over the years?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
135 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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