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how elephants' behavior is amazing in humans' eyes

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Both the reading and the lecture talk about how elephants' behavior is amazing in humans' eyes. The author of the excerpt provides three specific and unbelievable behaviors of elephants that are the reason for our interested in elephants. Nonetheless, the professor in the lecture denies the author's opinion. She claims that such a considering comes from some misunderstanding of humans toward elephants' behaviors. Following that the professor rejects these three behaviors of elephants as meaningful ones. First and foremost, according to the author of the article, elephants are aware of their death time, in fact, they know they will be died soon, because of that they go away from their group and live near the water until their death. However, the professor rejects this thought by referring to weak teeth of older elephants which make them look for softer vegetation to feed on. In the professor's viewpoint, the aforementioned weakness is the roots of their living away of their group, especially noticing to the fact that vegetation near water is softer than otherwise. Considering this, it is not surprising to find elephants' bone exclusively in a place. One another point said by the professor is that some older elephants live among their group. The professor further asserts that elephants are very sensitive inasmuch as they can be learned to follow a specific pattern, for instance, they can be trained to paint a picture by their trunks. It is important to notice that such an ability do not mean that elephants know flower or other pictures painted by themselves. Such an explanation proposed by the professor refutes the idea of the author of the reading that elephants are art presenting. The author of the article lasting insists that elephant afraid of mice because they live places where occupied by a few mice. Nevertheless, the professor reputes this by stating that such behavior is not because of their aware. In fact, they get away from animals that they are not familiar with. For instance, elephants in zoos see mice many times and are familiar with such an animal, so they are not at all in the scare of mice.

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