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Both the reading and the lecture talk about declining in the number of frog species around the world. The article provides three possible solutions to get rid of such a huge decreasing in frogs population, however all of them were unpractical in the professor's eyes. Accordingly, she denies all of them with some explanation. First and foremost, according to the writer of the excerpt, pesticides used by farmers in order to kill threaten insects for their crops play an important role in the declining of frogs' number. Considering this outcome of pesticides, they must become illegal to use in the neighborhood of frog habitats. Nevertheless, the professor in the lecture sees such a solution as an uneconomic and unfair one. She refers to harms arose from prohibition of pesticides for farmers. Farmers with such a farmland will obtain excess limitation in comparison to the rest of them, so they will have some disadvantages. They will not be able to compete with their counterparts. Secondly, the writer of the article claims that a fungus is one of the major reasons to cause the very decrease. Scientists have to treat frogs from this infection. Nonetheless, the professor in the lecture rejects such a notion by mentioning to problems of it. Treatment must be done in a large scale, since not only do all frogs have to catch to treat directly, but also such a treatment can not be beneficial for the next generations; in fact, every new young frog must treat in the same way. In this regard, the aforementioned solution is complicated and expensive. The author of the reading lasting insists that protecting the natural habitats of frogs, wetland and water habitats, result in preventing frogs population declining. However, the professor in the lecture refutes this solution too by saying that human activities do not a significant effect on habitats of frogs. She maintains that global warming is the root of threatening frogs habitats. In her viewpoint, if wetlands and water habitats were been not allowed to excessive use and development, it would not change anything about frogs habitats because global warming impact is unlikely to stop.
Both the reading and the
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lecture
talk about declining in the number of
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frog
species around the world. The article provides three possible
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solutions
to
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get
rid of such a huge decreasing in
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frogs
population,
however
all of them were unpractical in the professor's eyes.
Accordingly
, she denies all of them with
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some
explanation.

First
and foremost, according to the writer of the excerpt, pesticides
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used
by farmers in order to kill threaten insects for their crops play an
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important
role in the declining of frogs' number. Considering this outcome of pesticides, they
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must
become illegal to
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use
in the neighborhood of
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frog
habitats.
Nevertheless
, the professor in the
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lecture
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sees
such a
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solution
as an uneconomic and unfair one. She refers to harms arose from prohibition of pesticides for farmers. Farmers with such a farmland will obtain excess limitation
in comparison
to the rest of them,
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so
they will have
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some
disadvantages. They will not be able to compete with their counterparts.

Secondly
, the writer of the article claims that a fungus is one of the major reasons to cause the
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very
decrease. Scientists
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have to
treat
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frogs
from this infection. Nonetheless, the professor in the
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lecture
rejects such a notion by mentioning to problems of it. Treatment
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must
be done
in a large scale, since not
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only
do all
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frogs
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have to
catch to treat
directly
,
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but
also
such a treatment can not be beneficial for the
next
generations; in fact, every new young
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frog
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must
treat
in the same way
. In this regard, the aforementioned
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solution
is complicated
and expensive.

The author of the reading lasting insists that protecting the natural habitats of
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frogs
, wetland and water habitats, result in preventing
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frogs
population declining.
However
, the professor in the
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lecture
refutes this
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solution
too by saying that human activities do not a significant effect on habitats of
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frogs
. She maintains that global warming is the root of threatening
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frogs
habitats. In her viewpoint, if wetlands and water habitats
were been
not
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allowed
to excessive
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use
and development, it would not
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change
anything about
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frogs
habitats
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because
global warming impact is unlikely to
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stop
.
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IELTS essay declining in the number of frog species around the world, find ways to solve it.

Essay
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4 paragraphs
356 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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