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How electricity is generated by a hydroelectric dam. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer explaining how the process works.

How electricity is generated by a hydroelectric dam. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer explaining how the process works. PV78J
Hydroelectric dams are used to generate non-polluting and renewable electricity. These dams are constructed at reservoir of water and with proper channelization of water we are able to generate electricity. To understand electricity generation we need to look at how the actual process works. A water reservoir is selected where we can construct a dam which can take huge amount of water intake and pass it to turbine. From reservoir a penstock is created which allows controlled water flow to turbine. When turbine moves kinetic energy from water is converted to electric power with help of a generator which is inside a powerhouse. Long distance power lines are used to transfer electricity to cities, industries etc. We also have internal mechanism by which water is transferred to main river flow. Hydroelectric dams are very important to conserve nature in multiple ways, one by reducing pollution and providing renewable energy.
Hydroelectric
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dams
are
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used
to generate non-polluting and renewable electricity. These
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dams
are constructed
at reservoir of
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water
and with proper channelization of
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water
we are able to generate electricity.

To understand electricity generation we need to look at how the actual process works. A
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water
reservoir
is selected
where we can construct a
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dam
which can take huge amount of
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water
intake and pass it to turbine. From reservoir a
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penstock
is created
which
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allows
controlled
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water
flow to turbine.
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When
turbine
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moves
kinetic energy from
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water
is converted
to electric power with
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help
of a generator which is inside a powerhouse. Long distance power lines are
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used
to transfer electricity to cities, industries etc. We
also
have internal mechanism by which
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water
is transferred
to main river flow.

Hydroelectric
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dams
are
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very
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important
to conserve nature in multiple ways, one by reducing pollution and providing renewable energy.

IELTS essay How electricity is generated by a hydroelectric dam. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer explaining how the process works.

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