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Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of children playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects? In the contemporary world, with the development of technology folks have broad range of access to computers. It is seen that children get addicted to the fascinating computer games rather than indulging in outdoor activities. This essay will deal with the negatives effects of playing online games and measures that could be taken to decline the ill effects. To begin with, there are numerous negative impacts on youngsters playing games on computer; the first and foremost could be the drastic health issues on the children. To be more precise, because of the vibrant and interesting games on the internet, teenagers easily get addicted to it where they spend their entire leisure time. Because of the excessive addiction children may develop diseases which might be

Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of children playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects? In the contemporary world, with the development of technology folks have broad range of access to computers. It is seen that children get addicted to the fascinating computer games rather than indulging in outdoor activities. This essay will deal with the negatives effects of playing online games and measures that could be taken to decline the ill effects. To begin with, there are numerous negative impacts on youngsters playing games on computer; the first and foremost could be the drastic health issues on the children. To be more precise, because of the vibrant and interesting games on the internet, teenagers easily get addicted to it where they spend their entire leisure time. Because of the excessive addiction children may develop diseases which might be short term to long term. For instance, a research by the Harvard University claims deterioration in eye sight and obesity in children playing computer games on long run. Secondly, it could also lead to deprivation in cognitive and intellectual skills in early age. This could result in inability to socialise in the community and difficulty in decision making. Certainly, these bad effects could be minimized by undertaking appropriate measures. Firstly, the government can implement rigorous rules on time limit for playing video games. That is to say, they can circulate conditions on the websites releasing the games online to restrict the duration of the game where the game must automatically stop once the time exceeds. Furthermore, the authority can commence appealing outdoor games and competition in every street of the province; this could be accompanied by attractive prizes at the end for the winners. To conclude, it is true that playing online games results in creating various health concern and other skills which is essential for life, the government can bridge programmes and regulate websites to combat the issue in future.

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