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how does wind up radio work?

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Wind up radio uses hand-power to generate electricity. The user can be turned the handle to wind it up. The wind-up radio has handle connects to a small generator. The energy wind up radio turning the handle it is the generator, makes electricity. The knob can be used change channels. When the radio is turn on it’s powered form to battery store electricity. They use recharge battery wind for 30 seconds

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