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talk about your wishes in the future 8QNDx
Today is quite intrinsic day because everyone wants to learn English, consequently I ought to be ready and fight for my dreams. However, there are several problems encountering me along with my goals to be achieved. To be honest, I do not have clue to decide where to work or live. In other words, I do not know whom to be married with due to the fact of lacking of good women and I do not consider myself as a good man, on the contrary I want a wife that is better than me all sectors education, ethics, and morals. May Allah help me to get such as that female I wish.
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Today
is quite intrinsic day
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because
everyone wants to learn English,
consequently
I ought to be ready and fight for my dreams.
However
, there are several problems encountering me along with my goals to
be achieved
. To be honest, I do not have clue to decide where to work or
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live
.
In other words
, I do not know whom to
be married
with due to the fact of lacking of
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good
women and I do not consider myself as a
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good
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man
,
on the contrary
I want a wife
that is
better than me all
Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean "sectors'" or "sector's"?
sectors
education, ethics, and morals. May Allah
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help
me to
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get
such as that female I wish.
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IELTS essay talk about your wishes in the future

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
112 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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