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How did you spend your time in lockdown?

How did you spend your time in lockdown? aVrEo
Lockdown was the time which no one expected would come in life. Everyone's life just paused for a while. I did wake up at 11: 00 am everyday. Then i did help my mom with the household stuff. Luckily we cousins leave nearby and so daily in afternoon we played different games, we watched a lot of movies, we made different varieties of dishes and enjoyed eating it together. The best part of the lockdown was that i learned how to cook. Due to busy schedule before lockdown, i was not able to learn cooking but during lockdown i was free so i learned cooking. I was also spending my time watching web series specially at night. It was fun watching web series till late as i use to wake up late. Thus, lockdown was the time which most of the people felt boring but for me lockdown was the time which i enjoyed a lot with my cousins and it brought me more closer to my family members
Lockdown was the
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in life. Everyone's life
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paused for a while.

I did wake up at 11: 00 am
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everyday
. Then
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i
did
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my mom with the household stuff. Luckily we cousins
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nearby and
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so
daily in afternoon we played
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different
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watched
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a lot of
movies, we made
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different
varieties of dishes and enjoyed eating it together. The best part of the lockdown was that
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i
learned how to cook. Due to busy schedule
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before
lockdown,
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i
was not able to learn cooking
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during lockdown
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i
was free
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so
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i
learned cooking. I was
also
spending my
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watching web series
specially
at night. It was fun watching web series till late as
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i
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Thus
, lockdown was the
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time
which most of the
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people
felt boring
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but
for me lockdown was the
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which
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i
enjoyed a lot with my cousins and it brought me
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more closer
to my family members
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IELTS essay How did you spend your time in lockdown?

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3 paragraphs
168 words
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