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How chocolate is produced.

How chocolate is produced. pR8pm

The rendered process delineates how make chocolate. At fleeting glance, it is lucid that first of all, cacao tree is grown in South America, Africa, Indonesia which bestowed ripe red pods. The initial step, husk are harvested and collect white cocoa grains. After fermentation of haw, it spread in the sun to dry. Further, drupes are put together into large bags and transferred by train or truck for factories. In factory, hips are roasted and crushed after that it's outer shell is pulled out. The eventual step, with the help of machines, its inner part pressed to produce liquid of chocolate. Overall, there are total 10 steps for the production of chocolate. All the steps are necessary, if one step is failed then whole process will be interrupted.

The rendered process delineates how This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 chocolate.

At fleeting glance, it is lucid that This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".first
first of all
, cacao tree is grown
 in South America, Africa, Indonesia which bestowed ripe red pods. The initial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
, husk are harvested
 and collect white cocoa grains. After fermentation of haw, it spread in the sun to dry. Further
, drupes are put
 together into large bags and transferred by train or truck for factories. In factory, hips are roasted
 and crushed after that it's outer shell is pulled
 out. The eventual You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
, with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of machines, its inner part pressed to produce liquid of chocolate.

Overall
, there are total 10 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
steps
 for the production of chocolate. All the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
steps
 are necessary, if one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
is failed
 then whole process will be interrupted
. 