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How chocolate is produced.

How chocolate is produced. pR8pm
The rendered process delineates how make chocolate. At fleeting glance, it is lucid that first of all, cacao tree is grown in South America, Africa, Indonesia which bestowed ripe red pods. The initial step, husk are harvested and collect white cocoa grains. After fermentation of haw, it spread in the sun to dry. Further, drupes are put together into large bags and transferred by train or truck for factories. In factory, hips are roasted and crushed after that it's outer shell is pulled out. The eventual step, with the help of machines, its inner part pressed to produce liquid of chocolate. Overall, there are total 10 steps for the production of chocolate. All the steps are necessary, if one step is failed then whole process will be interrupted.
The rendered process delineates how
make
chocolate.

At fleeting glance, it is lucid that
first of all
, cacao tree
is grown
in South America, Africa, Indonesia which bestowed ripe red pods. The initial
step
, husk
are harvested
and collect white cocoa grains. After fermentation of haw, it spread in the sun to dry.
Further
, drupes
are put
together into large bags and transferred by train or truck for factories. In factory, hips
are roasted
and crushed after that it's outer shell
is pulled
out. The eventual
step
, with the
help
of machines, its inner part pressed to produce liquid of chocolate.

Overall
, there are total 10
steps
for the production of chocolate. All the
steps
are necessary, if one
step
is failed
then whole process will
be interrupted
.
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IELTS essay How chocolate is produced.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
128 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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