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How can we save our Environment.

How can we save our Environment. wmonY
Saving nature is the best problems in these days. Environment is human's daily life. All people, animals, insects can do anything with the help of natural resources. Jungles and forests should be protected or else wild animals natural habitats will be destroyed and as a result some animals may become extinct. Using environment friendly products should be encouraged so that we don't pollute the water or damage the ozone layer simply by cleaning house. Stricter laws should be put into effect to prevent factories from polluting environment consequently both the air and water would be cleaner. More people should use public transport or bicycles as a result the air in cities would be wasted. All in all Environment should be saved by people. Rubbish, public transportation, smoking may be damaged air, so plants, green life are useful for human and animal life.
Saving nature is the best problems in these days.
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Environment
is human's daily life. All
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people
,
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animals
, insects can do anything with the
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help
of natural resources.

Jungles and forests should
be protected
or else wild
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animals
natural habitats will be
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destroyed
and
as a result
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some
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animals
may become extinct.

Using
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environment
friendly products should
be encouraged
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so
that we don't pollute the water or damage the ozone layer
simply
by cleaning
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house
.

Stricter laws should
be put
into effect to
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prevent
factories from polluting
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environment
consequently
both the air and water would be cleaner.

More
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people
should
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use
public transport or bicycles
as a result
the air in cities would
be wasted
.

All in all
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Environment
should
be saved
by
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people
. Rubbish, public transportation, smoking may
be damaged
air,
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so
plants, green life are useful for human and
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animal
life.

IELTS essay How can we save our Environment.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
142 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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