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How can governments encourage people to use water efficiently?

How can governments encourage people to use water efficiently? LLgQV
Water is an essential source of life. autorities shoul be taken action to protect it and to achive this goal, they can come up whith strategies to encourage people to help achieve this purpose. The chief methode is declining the cost of water-efficient appliances. Domestic governments can consider discounts on appliances that work with water, such as washing machines so that people can substitute old, high-consumption products with new, more efficient ones. further, the other strategy is relevant to encourage people to use recycled water. authorities can consider a scheme for recycled water pipeline for non-drinking purposes and consider a very small cost consumption this water. By reducing the water bill, people will automatically save water
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governments
can consider discounts on appliances that work with
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water
, such as washing machines
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people
can substitute
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old
, high-consumption products with new, more efficient ones.
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further
, the other strategy is relevant to encourage
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people
to
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use
recycled
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authorities
can consider a scheme for recycled
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water
pipeline for non-drinking purposes and consider a
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very
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cost consumption this
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. By reducing the
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IELTS essay How can governments encourage people to use water efficiently?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
115 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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