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How can government discourage people to use cars?

How can government discourage people to use cars? ORxej
There are a nemerous amount of activities for human beings. For example, going out for dinner or going to our favorite shopping mall. These are the things that keep us entertained. All of which requires the access to transportations. Certain activities can only be enjoyed with the help of transportation. Even our daily task like going the school is only feasible for us through the help of vehicles. To make commuting easier people often have their own cars. Cars provide purples with the comfort and a smoother transport. However, it can also be frustrating when there are too many cars on the road causing traffic jam. Not just that but traffic can be harmful to the environment. That is why people should reduce there use of personal vehicles. The government should promote environmental support and public transport by reducing its cost. Environmental issue plays a major role in our living qualities. The use of cars has been effecting the atmosphere detrimentally. To lessen the use of cars government can use this reason to support their claims. Showing citizens an alternative to commuting that cost less money and is better for the environment. Inform them on how they can make the ecosystem healthier for themselves. Many people may find that investing in a car can be financially better in the long run than using public transport. Though a cars cost more than one train ticket it is still considered to be more worth it. If government want to draw noman's attention to using public transport they will have to decrease the value of each route's ticket. For instance, when humans discover that public transport is cheaper than buying a car they will be drawn to using public transport. In everyday living transportation is vital to our lives, making everything much simpler. With that said, government should target citizens by drawing their attention to maintaining the environment and public transport by lessening its totals. To decrease the frustrating traffic jam. Benefiting the environment and our pockets.
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of activities for human beings.
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, going out for dinner or going to our favorite shopping mall. These are the things that
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keep
us entertained. All of which requires the access to transportations. Certain activities can
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only
be enjoyed
with the
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help
of transportation. Even our daily task like going the school is
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only
feasible for us through the
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help
of vehicles. To
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make
commuting easier
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people
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often
have their
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own
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cars
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Cars
provide purples with the comfort and a smoother
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transport
.
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, it can
also
be frustrating when there are too
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many
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cars
on the road causing traffic jam. Not
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just
that
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but
traffic can be harmful to the
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environment
.
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why
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people
should
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reduce
there
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use
of personal vehicles. The
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government


should promote environmental support and
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public
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transport
by reducing its cost.

Environmental issue plays a major role in our living qualities. The
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use
of
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cars
has been

effecting the atmosphere
detrimentally
. To lessen the
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use
of
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cars
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government
can
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use
this reason to support their claims. Showing citizens an alternative to commuting that cost less money and is better for the
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environment
. Inform them on how they can
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make
the ecosystem healthier for themselves.

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Many
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people
may find that investing in a
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car
can be
financially
better in the long run than using
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public
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transport
.
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cost more than one train ticket

it is
still
considered to be more worth it.
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want to draw
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noman
's attention

to using
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public
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transport
they will
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have to
decrease the value of each route's ticket.
For instance
, when humans discover that
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public
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transport
is cheaper than buying a
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car
they will
be drawn
to using
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public
transport.

In everyday living transportation is vital to our
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lives
, making everything much

simpler. With that said,
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government
should target citizens by drawing their attention to

maintaining the
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environment
and
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public
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transport
by lessening its totals. To decrease

the frustrating traffic jam. Benefiting the
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environment
and our pockets.
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IELTS essay How can government discourage people to use cars?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
334 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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