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How and when do individual Presidents matter for political outcomes in the United States?

How and when do individual Presidents matter for political outcomes in the United States? a8Dlm
At first, this essay will elaborate to what extend when individual presidents make a difference to political conseqences in the United States(US) in a profound manner. This literature will primarily give an introduction to roles of US Presidents. Subsenquently, will also provide how individual Presidents’ performance have been when they are in the office. Following from that, this paper will offer the disparities between US and Prsidential system in other countries. Then, provide an illustration on how and at what instance precisely that individual Presidents contribute to political outcomes and summarise at the end, in accordingly. Firstly, in order to understand how Presidential system in the US simulated, it is note-worthing that all American Presidents have not been directly elected, instead they have been appointed through the process called the “electoral Colllege”. These electors represent on behalf of the US citizens, which make up to 538 electors in total. Each representatives will then votes for Presedential candidates. This type of votes is known as electoral votes whereas people’s votes can also be called as ”popular votes”. Nevertheless, there were possibilities that the result of Presidential election did not reflected the US citizens’ preferences. One instance according to Prsedential election process article (2021) took place in the 2000 presidential election, as George W. Bush received fewer popular votes than Albert Gore Jr. . However, he ended up winning a majority of electoral votes, the same is true for the 2016 presidential election, while Donald J. Trump got less propotion of popular votes compared to Hillary Clinton but won a majority of electoral votes. Despite such unexpected results, one of the most important roles of the US President is related to financial spending. Rizzo, L. , et al ( 2006) argued in their article that the president has a core objectives on how the federal budget is distributed to the states. For instance, they can either spend on the upcoming election or on educational purposes. Another major contribution that President can make the differences to political outcomes in the US is according to Levy, M (2022) which wrote that the president has the authoritative power to accept or disapprove (veto) legislation enacted by Congress, though Congress might override the president's veto by obtaining a two-thirds majority in favour of the bill. This illustrates that there are three branches in the US political system which is also known as speratation of power. These include jurisdictial, executive and legislative whereby each of them will not be able to intrude other brahnces. While the leader juristictial and legislative are head of Supreme court and Congress, in a respective order, the leader of executive power in the US is the President. He is mainly responsible for making political decisions within their country as well as implementing foreign policies to other nations at the same time. Unsimilaralily, according to Kagan, E (2022), she metioned in her article that Presidents are attempting to direct the federal bureaucracy for their own political goals in a way that has never existed previously. Such statement demonstrates that the Presidents role has been increasingly influential in a negative way. Inspite of the aforementioned article, it can be said that one of several factors that represent how individual Presidents’ do when they are in office is mass opinion. As Brody. A, R (1991) has written in his book that ‘the public's perception of the president's performance has become a significant political indicator in and of itself’. Likewise, other ways to measure the performance of each President can be On the other hand, there are handful of ways to distinguish between Presidential and Parliamentary system, which consider to be two main types of ruling systems worldwide. Lipset. M, S (1990) have said that “a prime minister with the full backing of parliament holds far more power than an American president”. This illustrates the advantage of having a prime minister as a comparison to presidential system. In addition,
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first
, this essay will elaborate to what
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extend
when
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individual
presidents
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make
a difference to political
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conseqences
in the United States(US)
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. This literature will
primarily
give an introduction to roles of US Presidents.
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Subsenquently
, will
also
provide how
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Presidents’ performance have been when they are in the office. Following from that, this paper will offer the disparities between US and
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Prsidential
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system
in
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other
countries. Then, provide an illustration on how and at what instance
precisely
that
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individual
Presidents contribute to political outcomes and
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at the
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.

Firstly
, in order to understand how
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Presidential
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system
in the US simulated, it is
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note-worthing
that all American Presidents have not been
directly
elected,
instead
they have
been appointed
through the process called the
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“electoral
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Colllege
”. These electors represent on behalf of the US citizens, which
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make
up to 538 electors in total.
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Each
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representatives
will then
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votes
for
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Presedential
candidates. This type of
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votes
is known
as
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electoral
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votes
whereas
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people
’s
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votes
can
also
be called
as
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”popular
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votes”
.
Nevertheless
, there were possibilities that the result of
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Presidential
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election
did not
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reflected
the US citizens’ preferences. One instance according to
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Prsedential
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election
process
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article
(2021) took place in the 2000
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presidential
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election
, as George W. Bush received fewer popular
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votes
than Albert Gore Jr.
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.
However
, he ended up winning a majority of
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electoral
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votes
, the same is true for the 2016
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presidential
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election
, while Donald J. Trump
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got
less
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propotion
of popular
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votes
compared to Hillary Clinton
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but
won a majority of
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electoral
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votes
. Despite such unexpected results, one of the most
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important
roles of the US President
is related
to financial spending.
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Rizzo
, L.
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,
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et al
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(
2006) argued in their
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article
that the president has a core objectives on how the federal budget
is distributed
to the states.

For instance
, they can either spend on the upcoming
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election
or on educational purposes.

Another major contribution that President can
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make
the differences to political outcomes in the US is according to Levy, M (2022) which wrote that the president has the authoritative
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power
to accept or disapprove (veto) legislation enacted by Congress, though Congress might override the president's veto by obtaining a two-thirds majority in
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favour
of the bill. This illustrates that there are three branches in the US political
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system
which is
also
known as
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speratation
of
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power
. These include
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jurisdictial
, executive and legislative whereby each of them will not be able to intrude
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other
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brahnces
. While the leader
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juristictial
and legislative are head of Supreme court and Congress, in a respective order, the leader of executive
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power
in the US is the President. He is
mainly
responsible for making political decisions within their country
as well
as implementing foreign policies to
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other
nations at the same time.

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Unsimilaralily
, according to
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Kagan
, E (2022), she
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metioned
in her
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article
that Presidents are attempting to direct the federal bureaucracy for their
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own
political goals in a way that has never existed previously. Such statement demonstrates that the
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Presidents
role has been
increasingly
influential in a
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negative
way.

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Inspite
of the aforementioned
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article
, it can
be said
that one of several factors that represent how
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individual
Presidents’ do when they are in office is mass opinion. As Brody. A, R (1991) has written in his book that ‘the public's perception of the president's performance has become a significant political indicator in and of itself’.
Likewise
,
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other
ways to measure the performance of each President can be

On the
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other
hand, there are
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handful
of ways to distinguish between
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Presidential
and Parliamentary
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system
, which consider to be two main types of ruling
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systems
worldwide.
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Lipset
. M, S (1990) have said that “a prime minister with the full backing of parliament holds far more
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power
than an American president”. This illustrates the advantage of having a prime minister as a comparison to
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presidential
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system
.
In addition
,
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IELTS essay How and when do individual Presidents matter for political outcomes in the United States?

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