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World without technology.

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A lot of people say, "The world is better without technology. " This is mostly said by the elderly. Nowadays, there is technology everywhere in the world. For example: in ordering food, in business, in the political relations of states, and even in the education system. The world is developing so fast now. We can't deny it. Even money is slowly disappearing and plastic cards are being used. My opinion on this problem is that almost everyone now knows that technology is mainly good on the phone and computers and on the internet people are sitting at work, but most people use these techniques to spend time. This is definitely bad.
A lot of
people
say,
"
The world is better without technology.
"
This is
mostly
said by the elderly. Nowadays, there is technology everywhere in the world.
For example
: in ordering food, in business, in the political relations of states, and even in the education system. The world is developing
so
fast
now
. We can't deny it. Even money is
slowly
disappearing and plastic cards are being
used
. My opinion on this problem is that almost everyone
now
knows that technology is
mainly
good
on the phone and computers and on the internet
people
are sitting at work,
but
most
people
use
these techniques to spend time. This is definitely
bad
.
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IELTS essay World without technology.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
111 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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