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Discuss about Parents responsibility

Discuss about Parents responsibility 8JAJ5

In this world family is the most basic need of every person. Every person brings up by their parents but paresnts have also some responsibilities to have a good and mature child and further i want to write about this. So, lets talk about this. In the begining, i would like to say the role of parents in an individual’s life is as important as food and every Gaurdians have their own mentality to bringup their child some responsibilities are like guardians should teach honesty to their child because an honest person build a future in a safe zone

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IELTS essay Discuss about Parents responsibility

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

98 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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