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How a town which has a past survived?

How a town which has a past survived? LGP6R

As all hell broke loose, a town which was once filled with an eerie silence suddenly becomes chaotic. Screams, noises, horrendous voices and a sudden chill that ran down through the spine of every being living there. A story about the gruesome tale of the inhabitants of a town facing the challenge to survive from more than one calamities. Malik Murphy, a 26 year old young man, who once known-to-be a professional thug as Skull. He never ever would have anticipated that somewhere, or at some point in his life, he would have to fight from the past of a place just to protect his family, his life and his dreams. Ackers, a beautiful place with a terrific past, and when that past comes back to haunt the future. Even not for once in their dreams, does anyone would have imagined that to protect themselves, they would have to /must uncover the secrets that had been buried there since before their existence. But does digging out the past would do them any good or would they face/ come across with another mystery that had never been resolved?

As all hell broke loose, a town which was once filled with an eerie silence suddenly
 becomes chaotic. Screams, noises, horrendous voices and a sudden chill that ran down through the spine of every being living there.

A story about the gruesome tale of the inhabitants of a town facing the challenge to survive from more than Don't use the number 'one' with plural words. Did you mean "one calamity", "a calamity", or simply "calamities"?one calamitya calamitycalamities
one calamities
.

Malik Murphy, a 26 year This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
, who once known-to-be a professional thug as Skull. He never ever would have anticipated that somewhere, or at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 point in his life, he would This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 fight from the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpriorcompletedspentformerprevious
past
 of a place This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 to protect his family, his life and his dreams.

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, a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
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past
, and when that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpriorcompletedspentformerprevious
past
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comes
 back to haunt the future. Even not for once in their dreams, does anyone would have imagined that to protect themselves, they would This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
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must
 uncover the secrets that had been buried
 there since This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 their existence.

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But
 does digging out the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpriorcompletedspentformerprevious
past
 would do them any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 or would they face/ This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 across with another mystery that had never been resolved
? 